Your advert was great, it did fulfil the purpose of the shoes with different jobs. The editing was the best part I think. The thing it didn't work well was there was no space at all for transitioning. About the ending, I didn't get it until I hear it on the third times. You could add some beat to make it more exciting for teens.
I love your ad, it's awesome. When i hear your ad i immediately think about shoes. Your ad is for everyone even a small child to an old man. I like the music and how to edited it. But some part was not really clear. If i can improve the ad I'll make it more clear so we can understand the song's melody better. Love Ure ad <3
I like how DD shoes are for everything and how you focused on that point through out the ad. I think this ad would be suitable for both teens and adults. You had good music timing. I think some voices were louder than others. You can make the voices equaly loud.
Haha! Your advertisement was great. It had its full purpose advertiseing DD shoes. There were many audience that can buy shoes: children, teenagers, and even adults or old people. I like how the song worked, it gave me goosebumps. The voices were broken evenly so that everybody got the part. But sometimes it might have some sudden cutting parts. That's all that can make it perfect. It was awesome, though. I love it. <3
This is really nice how you use the song to tell people to buy shoes. I think the audience is for teenager and also young adults. I like the rhythm of the song and the lyrics sticks with the product. I think you should add the background song when you're singing. Great job.
This is really great. It fulfil the purpose of the shoes, for everyone. I like the music, everything works well. I think you should include shoes sound to make it perfect.
I think your ads is great, it's fulfil the idea to make people buy you DD shoe. It cover for every age and for every activity. The editing is the best part of this ads. But I think if you but more sound effect in the people talking part it would be perfect. I think yours ads is totally awesome. I think it just need a little more longer in the part that people talk. Love it!
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Your advert was great, it did fulfil the purpose of the shoes with different jobs. The editing was the best part I think. The thing it didn't work well was there was no space at all for transitioning. About the ending, I didn't get it until I hear it on the third times. You could add some beat to make it more exciting for teens.
I love your ad, it's awesome. When i hear your ad i immediately think about shoes. Your ad is for everyone even a small child to an old man. I like the music and how to edited it. But some part was not really clear. If i can improve the ad I'll make it more clear so we can understand the song's melody better. Love Ure ad <3
I like how DD shoes are for everything and how you focused on that point through out the ad. I think this ad would be suitable for both teens and adults. You had good music timing. I think some voices were louder than others. You can make the voices equaly loud.
Haha! Your advertisement was great. It had its full purpose advertiseing DD shoes. There were many audience that can buy shoes: children, teenagers, and even adults or old people. I like how the song worked, it gave me goosebumps. The voices were broken evenly so that everybody got the part. But sometimes it might have some sudden cutting parts. That's all that can make it perfect. It was awesome, though. I love it. <3
This is really nice how you use the song to tell people to buy shoes. I think the audience is for teenager and also young adults. I like the rhythm of the song and the lyrics sticks with the product. I think you should add the background song when you're singing. Great job.
This is really great. It fulfil the purpose of the shoes, for everyone. I like the music, everything works well. I think you should include shoes sound to make it perfect.
I think your ads is great, it's fulfil the idea to make people buy you DD shoe. It cover for every age and for every activity. The editing is the best part of this ads. But I think if you but more sound effect in the people talking part it would be perfect. I think yours ads is totally awesome. I think it just need a little more longer in the part that people talk. Love it!
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